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Todd Anderson's avatar

Enjoyed the story. The pen in the gut was a nice touch: symbolic, ironic, and lethal.

R.R. Stephenson's avatar

The best tools of the trade for a corpo are often the simplest thanks for reading!

Gabriel B.'s avatar

The wet-cord office detail gives the scene a strong charge.

R.R. Stephenson's avatar

Glad you liked it thanks for reading m8!