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Stephen B. Anthony's avatar

This takes me back a long time to some early cyberpunk. Really great scene. Gritty. I like the lost arm bit.

My only criticism is his assumption that his employer sent the wraith is too abrupt. I'd rather you revealed that through the wraith first, or through inner monologue, narrowing down the suspects.

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Patrick Stark's avatar

Cool fight scene. I dig the vibes of it all. Keep it up

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