I love how this story pulls me right into its gritty, lived-in world. Everything feels real, from the casual banter to the weight of old mistakes catching up. The characters are sharp, the dialogue flows naturally, and that slow-building tension had me hooked right up to the gut-punch of an ending.
I'd love to explore the Grand Bazaar, but with an invisibility cloak, and God Mode on just for insurance.
Thanks so much for the comment! Yeah it's the type of city that would be interesting to see first hand but not to live in for even a second lol thanks so much for reading really appreciate it!
I love how this story pulls me right into its gritty, lived-in world. Everything feels real, from the casual banter to the weight of old mistakes catching up. The characters are sharp, the dialogue flows naturally, and that slow-building tension had me hooked right up to the gut-punch of an ending.
I'd love to explore the Grand Bazaar, but with an invisibility cloak, and God Mode on just for insurance.
Thanks so much for the comment! Yeah it's the type of city that would be interesting to see first hand but not to live in for even a second lol thanks so much for reading really appreciate it!